My poems..
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u2bibek
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Re: My poems..
hats off sweet
mushee- TRAINER
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Re: My poems..
babbal chha sweet nice poem.. love it..
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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SWEETNANU'S ANSWER.........
THANK YOU SO MUCH MUSHEE N U2BIBEK....
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
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Re: My poems..
I want to save my land.....
The Paradise of earth
existing freely from it's birth
with the history of mighty gurkhas
along with the combination of temples and stupas
Mt. Everest the nature's souvenir
standing high without fear
But now,
Someone has taken our peace
and just left noise and stress
Lord "Shiva" prisoned in Pashupati
"Buddha" weeping for honesty
But,
I want to save my land
against all those barriers and bands
I want my "Shiva" back smiling..
And my "Buddha" preaching
I want my former bravery
and all the golden history
Though, I am only one to stand
I want to save my land..
I want to save my Nepal
The Paradise of earth
existing freely from it's birth
with the history of mighty gurkhas
along with the combination of temples and stupas
Mt. Everest the nature's souvenir
standing high without fear
But now,
Someone has taken our peace
and just left noise and stress
Lord "Shiva" prisoned in Pashupati
"Buddha" weeping for honesty
But,
I want to save my land
against all those barriers and bands
I want my "Shiva" back smiling..
And my "Buddha" preaching
I want my former bravery
and all the golden history
Though, I am only one to stand
I want to save my land..
I want to save my Nepal
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
NANU'S COMMENT.....
ITS REALLY NICE......N PATRIOTIC......
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
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TRAVELLING DOWN THE MEMORY LANE.....
Traveling down memory lane
is not all black 'n white.
Traveling down memory lane
is not all lacking light.
Traveling down memory lane
is not eye filled with tears.
Traveling down memory lane
brings fresh and soothing air.
Traveling down memory lane
is love & pain, fun with friends.
Traveling down memory lane
is full of curves and bends.
Traveling down memory lane
is a test of time and mind
Traveling down memory lane
is a joy of it's kind.
is not all black 'n white.
Traveling down memory lane
is not all lacking light.
Traveling down memory lane
is not eye filled with tears.
Traveling down memory lane
brings fresh and soothing air.
Traveling down memory lane
is love & pain, fun with friends.
Traveling down memory lane
is full of curves and bends.
Traveling down memory lane
is a test of time and mind
Traveling down memory lane
is a joy of it's kind.
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
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Age : 31
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Re: My poems..
the show must go on........u2bibek wrote:
Still Life Goes on...
You are in joy in midst of frens and family..
and I am here wondering in agony..
all those happy days are gone..
But still the life goes on..
So many things to do..
and all this being without you..
I haven't imagined you will ever turn..
But still the life goes on..
Struggling to overcome every dead past..
trying to forget all those care and trust..
living empty with my heart burn..
But still the life goes on..
I have forgotten to smile..
still I have to travel many miles..
I have lost my way 'coz I am alone..
But still the life goes on..
Still the life goes on..
nice one..
senorita- FIRST CLASS
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Re: My poems..
thnx senorita... how abt some poems of urs..
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
Re: My poems..
To my teddy bear,
Teddy, I've been bad again,
My buda told me so;
I'm not quite sure what I did wrong,
But I thought that you might know.
When I called him the last time,
I knew that he didn’t wana talk;
Cause he was sounding awful hard,
harder then the rock.
I tried my best to be real good,
And do just what he said;
I cleaned my room all by myself,
I even made my bed.
But I think I might have talk a bit rude,
When I was in a bit hurry;
And I guess he didn't hear me,
When I told him I was sorry.
When I said, "I love you, buda,"
I guess he didn't understand;
Cause then he didn’t talk to me.
Or received my calls again.
So I came up here to talk to you,
Please tell me what to do;
Cause I really love my buda,
And I know he loves me, too.
And I don't think my hunny means,
To hurt me quite so bad;
I guess sometimes, he forget.
How it really makes me sad.
So Teddy, I wish you were real,
And you weren't just a bear;
Then you could help me find a way.
To tell him that i care,
To please try hard to understand.
How sad it makes me feel;
Cause the outside pain soon goes away,
But the inside never heals.
And if I could make all listen,
Maybe then they'd understand;
So other lovers just like me,
Wouldn't have to be hurt again.
But for now, I guess I'll hold you tight,
And pretend the pain's not there;
I know you'd never hurt me,
So Goodnight, Teddy Bear...
Teddy, I've been bad again,
My buda told me so;
I'm not quite sure what I did wrong,
But I thought that you might know.
When I called him the last time,
I knew that he didn’t wana talk;
Cause he was sounding awful hard,
harder then the rock.
I tried my best to be real good,
And do just what he said;
I cleaned my room all by myself,
I even made my bed.
But I think I might have talk a bit rude,
When I was in a bit hurry;
And I guess he didn't hear me,
When I told him I was sorry.
When I said, "I love you, buda,"
I guess he didn't understand;
Cause then he didn’t talk to me.
Or received my calls again.
So I came up here to talk to you,
Please tell me what to do;
Cause I really love my buda,
And I know he loves me, too.
And I don't think my hunny means,
To hurt me quite so bad;
I guess sometimes, he forget.
How it really makes me sad.
So Teddy, I wish you were real,
And you weren't just a bear;
Then you could help me find a way.
To tell him that i care,
To please try hard to understand.
How sad it makes me feel;
Cause the outside pain soon goes away,
But the inside never heals.
And if I could make all listen,
Maybe then they'd understand;
So other lovers just like me,
Wouldn't have to be hurt again.
But for now, I guess I'll hold you tight,
And pretend the pain's not there;
I know you'd never hurt me,
So Goodnight, Teddy Bear...
mushee- TRAINER
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Age : 31
Location : kathmandu
Re: My poems..
its really how m feeling right now
mushee- TRAINER
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Age : 31
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Re: My poems..
so sorry to hear tht.. no worries he will come back... mah wishes are with u hai.... n by the way nice expression of urs feelings.. say hii to ur teddy hehe... cummon cummon now smile...!!!!
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
HAPPINESS IS NOT COMFORT.......by DR. JOHN CELES....
Does Happiness depend upon comfort? ’
The answer is definitely a big, ‘No! ’
Happiness lies in not comforts alone!
Happiness is not a static quality of the human mind, body and soul.
All can’t remain happy all the time.
It would be foolishness to wish for a life, filled with happiness alone;
Happiness is more when woes come in-between.
Happiness is just a feeling weird!
Life could become boring and monotonous, when happiness is prolonged.
Even the pauper can be happier than the prince.
Even the beggar smiles and sleeps well, despite much strife.
Happiness is a frame of mind that’s dynamic in nature;
Happiness is a kind of mood of feeling very well;
Happiness is a state of one, when life seems worth living;
Happiness is something strange that varies with time, experience and wisdom.
Happiness is all within;
Happiness is in giving;
Happiness is in sharing;
Happiness is the ceiling, whatever you fix!
Happiness does not wholly depend on comforts;
Happiness cannot be bought by money;
Happiness is not all luxury;
Happiness is abstract to the core!
Happiness is in being child-like, though adult;
Happiness is in making and seeing the less fortunate ones, smile;
Happiness is in acting adult-like, although a child
Happiness is in giving something to someone, although you still need it.
Happiness is in sacrificing for others’ sake;
Happiness is in giving up your chance to someone, who most needs it;
Happiness is in doing acts of charity;
Happiness is when you’ve led a righteous life.
Happiness to some is in dreams alone;
Happiness to some doing risky feats;
Happiness to a few is in a sheer lazy life;
Happiness to some is in yeoman service to mankind.
Happiness is a phenomenon;
Happiness is a quirk of fate;
Happiness is quite rare and scarce at times;
Happiness to some is in living in a virtual world!
Happiness is in braving the storms of life;
Happiness is in toiling for others’ sakes;
Happiness is in sharing your talents and ken;
Happiness is in loving your poor brethren.
The answer is definitely a big, ‘No! ’
Happiness lies in not comforts alone!
Happiness is not a static quality of the human mind, body and soul.
All can’t remain happy all the time.
It would be foolishness to wish for a life, filled with happiness alone;
Happiness is more when woes come in-between.
Happiness is just a feeling weird!
Life could become boring and monotonous, when happiness is prolonged.
Even the pauper can be happier than the prince.
Even the beggar smiles and sleeps well, despite much strife.
Happiness is a frame of mind that’s dynamic in nature;
Happiness is a kind of mood of feeling very well;
Happiness is a state of one, when life seems worth living;
Happiness is something strange that varies with time, experience and wisdom.
Happiness is all within;
Happiness is in giving;
Happiness is in sharing;
Happiness is the ceiling, whatever you fix!
Happiness does not wholly depend on comforts;
Happiness cannot be bought by money;
Happiness is not all luxury;
Happiness is abstract to the core!
Happiness is in being child-like, though adult;
Happiness is in making and seeing the less fortunate ones, smile;
Happiness is in acting adult-like, although a child
Happiness is in giving something to someone, although you still need it.
Happiness is in sacrificing for others’ sake;
Happiness is in giving up your chance to someone, who most needs it;
Happiness is in doing acts of charity;
Happiness is when you’ve led a righteous life.
Happiness to some is in dreams alone;
Happiness to some doing risky feats;
Happiness to a few is in a sheer lazy life;
Happiness to some is in yeoman service to mankind.
Happiness is a phenomenon;
Happiness is a quirk of fate;
Happiness is quite rare and scarce at times;
Happiness to some is in living in a virtual world!
Happiness is in braving the storms of life;
Happiness is in toiling for others’ sakes;
Happiness is in sharing your talents and ken;
Happiness is in loving your poor brethren.
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
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Age : 31
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Re: My poems..
gud one thanks for sharing wid us but better to try ur self hai
cuty- FIRST CLASS
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Re: My poems..
ani cuty timro pani jaos na ta ek dui wota.. hunna ra.. ???
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
IT MUST BE AN INSPIRATION.....
It must be for inspiration that you created the heavens,
the earth, the sky, the sea
I look at the stars and I am contented that there is peace,
a calmness right into my soul
It must be for inspiration that you created man,
his heart, his soul, his spirit
I look at how he goes about his life and there is wonder,
how you have made us so wise
It must be for inspiration that you have brought people together,
they court, they join their lives, they grow old
I look at how they have fulfilled their dreams in the eyes of their kids,
it brings a special longing in my heart to have my dreams fulfilled too
It must be for inspiration that I met you at this time,
I was busy, was lonely, was caught up
I look at how God has allowed circumstances to turn,
after sometime there was spark that cannot be denied
It must be for inspiration that i have met you and you are such
a pleasant gift at the right time
I look at my busy days and you give me delight each day,
I am inspired, I'm happy, I am blessed
Looking at you, I don't know yet the purpose,
for now I'm thinking it must be for inspiration
the earth, the sky, the sea
I look at the stars and I am contented that there is peace,
a calmness right into my soul
It must be for inspiration that you created man,
his heart, his soul, his spirit
I look at how he goes about his life and there is wonder,
how you have made us so wise
It must be for inspiration that you have brought people together,
they court, they join their lives, they grow old
I look at how they have fulfilled their dreams in the eyes of their kids,
it brings a special longing in my heart to have my dreams fulfilled too
It must be for inspiration that I met you at this time,
I was busy, was lonely, was caught up
I look at how God has allowed circumstances to turn,
after sometime there was spark that cannot be denied
It must be for inspiration that i have met you and you are such
a pleasant gift at the right time
I look at my busy days and you give me delight each day,
I am inspired, I'm happy, I am blessed
Looking at you, I don't know yet the purpose,
for now I'm thinking it must be for inspiration
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
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Join date : 2009-04-19
Age : 31
Location : KATHMANDU
Re: My poems..
Key to my heart...
I had closed the door upon my heart
and wouldn't let anyone in
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
but that would never happen again
I locked the door and
tossed the key as
hard and as far as I could
My heart was closed for good
Then you came into my life and
made me change my mind
just when I thought that
tiny key was impossible to find
that is when you held out your hand
and proved me wrong
inside your palm was the
Key to My Heart
You had it all along
I had closed the door upon my heart
and wouldn't let anyone in
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
but that would never happen again
I locked the door and
tossed the key as
hard and as far as I could
My heart was closed for good
Then you came into my life and
made me change my mind
just when I thought that
tiny key was impossible to find
that is when you held out your hand
and proved me wrong
inside your palm was the
Key to My Heart
You had it all along
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Join date : 2009-04-19
Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
PLS COME BACK..
IF I CUD HAV U BACK
FOR JUS ONE MORE DAY,
I WOULD DO ANY THING
TO NOT LET IT PASS AWAY
IF I CUD HEAR UR VOICE
JUS ONCE AGAIN,
I WOULD SIMLE,
N FOGET ALL MI PAIN.
IF DREAMS CUD B TRUE
I'D NEVA WAKE
M SORRY FOR ALL
THOSE LIL MISTAKE
WIS U WERE HERE
CZ I CANT SMILE
UR BROKEN DRMS
ARE LEFT IN PILES,
JUS CUM BACK
N I'LL MAKE UR DRMS CUM TRUE
IF ONLY FO ONE DAY
I CUD HAV YOU...
A THOUSND TEARS CANT BRING U BACK I KNOW CZ I'VE CRIED,
A THOUSAND PRAYS WONT GET U HERE I KNO CZ I'VE TRIED
IF U HAV SOME ONE CLOSE TO UR HEART LET IT B UR MOMMY DADDY BROTHERS SISTERS RELATIVE OR FRIENDS TREASURE THEM CZ ONCE THEY GO AWAYS FRM WHERE THEY CANT COME BACK ALL U CAN DO IS REGRET N WIS IF U CUD HAV THEM BACK LET THEM KNOW U LOVE THEM CZ U MIGHT NOT GET THAT CHANCE AGAIN
FOR JUS ONE MORE DAY,
I WOULD DO ANY THING
TO NOT LET IT PASS AWAY
IF I CUD HEAR UR VOICE
JUS ONCE AGAIN,
I WOULD SIMLE,
N FOGET ALL MI PAIN.
IF DREAMS CUD B TRUE
I'D NEVA WAKE
M SORRY FOR ALL
THOSE LIL MISTAKE
WIS U WERE HERE
CZ I CANT SMILE
UR BROKEN DRMS
ARE LEFT IN PILES,
JUS CUM BACK
N I'LL MAKE UR DRMS CUM TRUE
IF ONLY FO ONE DAY
I CUD HAV YOU...
A THOUSND TEARS CANT BRING U BACK I KNOW CZ I'VE CRIED,
A THOUSAND PRAYS WONT GET U HERE I KNO CZ I'VE TRIED
IF U HAV SOME ONE CLOSE TO UR HEART LET IT B UR MOMMY DADDY BROTHERS SISTERS RELATIVE OR FRIENDS TREASURE THEM CZ ONCE THEY GO AWAYS FRM WHERE THEY CANT COME BACK ALL U CAN DO IS REGRET N WIS IF U CUD HAV THEM BACK LET THEM KNOW U LOVE THEM CZ U MIGHT NOT GET THAT CHANCE AGAIN
mushee- TRAINER
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Age : 31
Location : kathmandu
Re: My poems..
mushee.. though i dun know what exactly love means.. but when reading ur words i felt u do really living in depression.. this is my private feelings hai.. may b m wrong.. but why don't u just let ur life goes on..
cheers.. remem many others live with u n smile when u smile...
let by gone be by gone..
cheers.. remem many others live with u n smile when u smile...
let by gone be by gone..
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
- Posts : 205
Join date : 2009-04-19
Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
Re: My poems..
A Blue Star in Your Eye..
On the wings of an eagle,
My love for you flies.
Soaring higher and higher,
And touching the skies.
I reached up above,
And pulled a star from the sky.
To place it within,
Your precious minds eye.
To dwell there forever,
As my love for you.
On the wings of our love,
Enduring and true.
I honor you my darling,
With all that I am.
Please darling please,
Will you be my man?
There are so many things,
My heart wants to say.
I love you sweetheart,
There is no other way.
On the wings of an eagle,
My love for you flies.
Soaring higher and higher,
And touching the skies.
I reached up above,
And pulled a star from the sky.
To place it within,
Your precious minds eye.
To dwell there forever,
As my love for you.
On the wings of our love,
Enduring and true.
I honor you my darling,
With all that I am.
Please darling please,
Will you be my man?
There are so many things,
My heart wants to say.
I love you sweetheart,
There is no other way.
u2bibek- FIRST CLASS
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Join date : 2009-04-19
Age : 39
Location : Damauli, Tanahun
Joy of my Soul.....
Joy of my soul, Joy of my heart,
You've given me love from the very start;
In you I live, I move and I breathe ~
To you my whole being does cleave
Joy of my soul, Joy of my spirit,
Of goodness ~ may I be drawn near it
And to all that is holy, right and true,
May I ever be totally committed to you
Joy of my soul, Joy of my life,
You are the Rock during all the strife.
Many are the benefits you freely give;
Because of you, I have the will to live.
Joy of my soul, Joy of my heart,
Let's assure one another, we'll never part.
You are my Lord, my God, my All;
I obey your statutes, I love your Law.
Joy of my soul, Joy of my spirit
Absence from you, I surely would fear it.
Never permit me to ever stray
Protect me ever and always, I pray
Joy of my soul, Joy of my life,
Sin pierces your heart ~ like a knife.
You are The Lord of Lords and The King of Kings,
O the JOY your Salvation brings.
The battle for good and evil still wages,
But You, O Lord, are JOY for all ages.
Judgement day will soon arrive;
The goats'll die and the sheep'll thrive.
Please God ~ your faithful ones'll be alive.
O Jesus, as Groom, you'll come for your Bride
You'll draw her very close to your side
Embrace her with your arms open wide
And together in Heaven forever abide.
You, O Lord, are JOY for all ages.
JOY, JOY, JOY!
YOU are JOY for All Ages! ! !
You've given me love from the very start;
In you I live, I move and I breathe ~
To you my whole being does cleave
Joy of my soul, Joy of my spirit,
Of goodness ~ may I be drawn near it
And to all that is holy, right and true,
May I ever be totally committed to you
Joy of my soul, Joy of my life,
You are the Rock during all the strife.
Many are the benefits you freely give;
Because of you, I have the will to live.
Joy of my soul, Joy of my heart,
Let's assure one another, we'll never part.
You are my Lord, my God, my All;
I obey your statutes, I love your Law.
Joy of my soul, Joy of my spirit
Absence from you, I surely would fear it.
Never permit me to ever stray
Protect me ever and always, I pray
Joy of my soul, Joy of my life,
Sin pierces your heart ~ like a knife.
You are The Lord of Lords and The King of Kings,
O the JOY your Salvation brings.
The battle for good and evil still wages,
But You, O Lord, are JOY for all ages.
Judgement day will soon arrive;
The goats'll die and the sheep'll thrive.
Please God ~ your faithful ones'll be alive.
O Jesus, as Groom, you'll come for your Bride
You'll draw her very close to your side
Embrace her with your arms open wide
And together in Heaven forever abide.
You, O Lord, are JOY for all ages.
JOY, JOY, JOY!
YOU are JOY for All Ages! ! !
SWEETNANU- TRAINER
- Posts : 168
Join date : 2009-04-19
Age : 31
Location : KATHMANDU
Re: My poems..
im putting all my drms inside a box
cz i'll need 'em back sum day
im closing my eies in da dark
hiding all my fears away
i didnt knew hw strong i was
untill it was all i cud do
i never knew how lost i was
utill da day i found you
bt you faked it all n let me fall
i pretended it didnt hurt bad
no matter hw good i smiled outside
bt inside i ws really sad
i truly tried to follow my hrt
as all those ppl told
bt since it ws in pieces
i dnt kno which way to hold
im all fed up wid da way it is
n im confuse wat else to say
so im putting my drms inside a box
hoping i'll need 'em back sum day...
i cnt think of ant topic fo this poem k....
cz i'll need 'em back sum day
im closing my eies in da dark
hiding all my fears away
i didnt knew hw strong i was
untill it was all i cud do
i never knew how lost i was
utill da day i found you
bt you faked it all n let me fall
i pretended it didnt hurt bad
no matter hw good i smiled outside
bt inside i ws really sad
i truly tried to follow my hrt
as all those ppl told
bt since it ws in pieces
i dnt kno which way to hold
im all fed up wid da way it is
n im confuse wat else to say
so im putting my drms inside a box
hoping i'll need 'em back sum day...
i cnt think of ant topic fo this poem k....
mushee- TRAINER
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Age : 31
Location : kathmandu
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